essay discussion D#10 HW#3

I liked this essay. I thought it flowed well and that it had good voice to it. The author used the resources to their full advantage. The paper was clearly bias to that fact that teenagers are responsible and was in favor of them voting. However, if I was to revise and edit this. I would have mentioned why teenagers are not allowed to vote to day and why people in power do not let teenagers vote. He briefly mentions that people think teenagers are not well versed on the issues, but i think he should have elaborated on this a bit. If I was writing the essay, I would have chosen the other side of the argument because I believe teenagers are not educated enough to vote.