Tuesday, December 8

D#12 HW#4 draft an effective introduction

Mad cow could happen to anyone that eats beef.I'm sure my audience is neutral to the issue at this point because they haven't read my paper yet. However, after they have read it, they will stand with me. My authority to wright comes as a concerned citizen. Many other scientists have written books, blogs, articles, and the like about mad cow. Even reporters and government officials, pretty much every type of person has written something about mad cow. They have strengths as their creditability and I'm not sure this topic has weaknesses, except if the writer is not confident in their opinion, but I have not run across that. My audience probably doesn't know a lot about my topic, but they will learn a lot more after reading my paper.I am not sure how long my paper will be. I don't like having a set amount of pages I have to write. I like the freedom to write enough to get my point across, but not too much that I have to use "fillers" which make the paper uninteresting.

Mad cow could happen to anyone that eats beef. A person could get it from eating their afternoon lunch, or their perfectly prepared dinner. Mad cow in meat is invisible to the naked eye as well as the rest of the 5 senses. One could be eating and not even know it. How can we protect ourselves then? Well one answer is to stop eating meat all together. However, since most people would take the risk rather then give up their precious steak, there are several other options.

This paragraph is something I could use to develop my conclusion/call to action.

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