Wednesday, September 9

Essay discussion D#3 HW#3

I really enjoyed reading this proposal and i think i would enjoy reading the essay. I really liked her story on how she came up with the topic she wanted to write about. I think she chose a topic that she could really get into which would make an excellent paper. This was a good example for what we have to do for WP#1. I think after reading this example i have a better idea of what we are supposed to do for WP#1. I wouldn't change this essay because i think she did a really good job. However, if i were to turn it in i would choose a different topic.
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  1. SummerSeptember 12, 2009 at 9:10 PM

    I agree that the proposal was really good.

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  2. DeniseSeptember 23, 2009 at 8:31 PM

    The only thing I would do differently is to add more examples for each option. Maybe give some tips to make it through those "rough patches" a couple weeks after starting to breastfeed. She could possibly give her audience members who are mommies and/or pregnant women who are contemplating each choice some encouragement. It would be a good paper though as this is a good topic to debate.

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