http://summer-english102blog.blogspot.com/2009/11/d12-hw8-rough-draft.html
http://missrodas.blogspot.com/2009/11/d12-hw8-draft-of-wp3.html
I learned alot of information from my class mates blogs. I liked how Marissa used personal testimony and how she made her argument hard to argue with. I didn't get any reviews on my draft because there are only two other people keeping up with this class and they have already finished their work.Turnitin.com also had no comments for me. I will however go and revise my own draft as I need to add to it to make it longer and I need to make sure it flows well.
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