for my class Eng 102
I like your thesis and I think it's fine the way it is. The only thing that I could suggest is maybe adding the reason to your claim......?
sounds like you are very confident, wish i was as sure of my paper
I like your thesis and I think it's fine the way it is. The only thing that I could suggest is maybe adding the reason to your claim......?
ReplyDeletesounds like you are very confident, wish i was as sure of my paper
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